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Post by juel on Jul 9, 2011 20:25:56 GMT -5
gl, send M3 a message with each chapter. I wanna read and give helpful criticism
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Post by TChao on Jul 10, 2011 1:32:20 GMT -5
Yes, do what I've been trying to do for years... Chaosia is what those have become
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Post by inazukami on Jul 11, 2011 0:36:17 GMT -5
Felt bad to day and tiered... Did not wright first chapter but know how it is going to go... Watched a couple of duels and made a space ship deck for no good reason...still tiered but continue to post... Glaaaarg fualnig bluurrrrk
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Post by inazukami on Jul 11, 2011 16:59:35 GMT -5
Made ch 0/intro chapter and I am working on number 1 now.
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Post by juel on Jul 11, 2011 17:41:57 GMT -5
i wanna read it
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Post by inazukami on Jul 12, 2011 11:31:20 GMT -5
Ok if eny one wants to read/criticize it pls tell M3 and I will pm a chapter to you.
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Post by inazukami on Jul 14, 2011 23:47:17 GMT -5
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Post by juel on Jul 15, 2011 8:13:04 GMT -5
Did you want Alex to be affected by the stone? If you do, but it affects other alternates, what you should do is go ahead with it, then write a chapter or two describing what the alternates were doing before what happens with Alex then have each little section end with their reaching the stone when it happens. If you don't...I don't know your story,you do. This is like M3 asking you for help with my plotline when you know nothing of my story, lol. :)Good Luck
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Post by inazukami on Jul 15, 2011 10:47:40 GMT -5
Well I am stuck with the last main guy because I don't know what he did before the stones (he is the only one with out a back story). All I got on him is he is from the world were weird is the norm (like their are almost no normal people. Most people are half humans half animals, (whim I first started thinking about this series I did not know about furries but that's what they are in truth) cyborgs, vampires, werewolves, aliens, and other stuff like that) his mom is a dogling "furry and his dad was a werewolf. He is very strong but over reacts easily and some what hyper.
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Post by TChao on Jul 15, 2011 13:36:36 GMT -5
I wanna read!
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Post by inazukami on Aug 2, 2011 11:35:27 GMT -5
Just watched captain America and I like it.... I know what the last guy is going to do in the book thing but have not got around to doing it. I am tired........zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Post by TChao on Aug 3, 2011 10:59:03 GMT -5
Hey do you wanna feel so energetic!?
Try powerthirst!
Energy drinks for men who want gratuitous amounts of energy!
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Post by inazukami on Aug 11, 2011 11:27:45 GMT -5
Wow between college and mass effect I have no spare time. I have not gotten on here in a long time....
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Post by TChao on Aug 11, 2011 22:34:00 GMT -5
You humanz and ur college...
Btw, if you were junior last year, then how r u in college?
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Post by inazukami on Aug 12, 2011 17:06:07 GMT -5
It's complicated........Gaaaa brain hertz aarg ......what were we talking about?
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